Category Archives: historic fiction

Stray Sketches : Lucy (I)

 

 

Here are a couple of sketches written about Lucy Audubon. I was reading biographies when I wrote this post, by way of background.

 

Rebecca — a sketch
She is the daughter of a plantation owner in Louisiana. Her mother has hired Lucy as a tutor.

Rebecca’s even temper had a notable exception. She hated her younger sister — all that flashing warmth and dimples and approval. How without even trying she drew people to her, and not just any people, but young men, men with properties and approving parents. Sarah’s problem would not be attracting a husband, but rather trying to decide between the possibilities. The blonde tresses didn’t help either. Rebecca’s thick auburn hair by comparison seemed if not a liability, at least dull. Sarah had delicate wrists and a tiny waist and pinched her lips into a heart when trying to remember something — as if the cuteness of her pucker could compensate for the flimsiness of her mind. Rebecca stood a head taller than Sarah and tended toward sturdiness and rarely made a joke.

Of course, Rebecca capitalized on being the serious, thoughtful daughter, the one on whom her father could rely. Some comfort. Her mother kept a running inventory of fault and seemed to count “not being Sarah” as a fault. “Maybe you should ride that roan a little less often,” she’d admonish, as if avoiding horses would make her more willowy and compliant. It didn’t seem to register that Sarah also happened to be an accomplished equestrian. What girl of means in Beech Bayou was not? Her mother’s superficiality made her blind to Rebecca’s strengths, blind to matters beyond appearances and wealth and land. Eldest sons in the area, she kept apprised of. What interested Rebecca did not register at all.

And so, when Lucy was hired as a tutor in the fall of 18xx, it was with more than a little relief that Rebecca found herself a star. The makeshift classroom housed Sarah and her and a half dozen of their neighbors’ daughters. Even before the tutor took up residence in the little cabin past the alfalfa fields, Rebecca had found refuge in literature and history. The great British poets, biographies penned by Plutarch. But with Lucy’s attentive tutelage, she found her horizons widened, her intellect sharpened, and more importantly, she found herself recognized. She was a person of worth!

Lucy was too professional to let any preferences show, just as Rebecca well-hid her weary contempt for her younger sister. But they both found small and subtle ways to convey a warm mutual regard. Rebecca knew she was the favorite.

 

In the Early Dark

In the early dark, Lucy reached for him and found only the cool of the sheets and then remembered. A sick feeling. How Mrs. Rankin barged in late last night and caught them in passionate embrace! Apparently, a slave had seen James crossing the lawn towards the cottage sometime after midnight and awakened his mistress. They did not knock. The two of them stood in the doorway, illuminated by lantern light looking like ghouls from the Underworld. Mrs. Rankin shrieked – my Lord! You’d think she’d been struck or stung by venom.

Alone hours later, Lucy ran a finger across her collar bones remembering the ugly intrusion. How she’d sat up in horrified dismay holding the covers up to her neck as if there had been any dignity left to protect.

Much as Lucy would prefer never to see her employer again, she had no choice. But now Mrs. Rankin’s entitlement rankled more than ever. Acting as if Lucy living in her schoolhouse cottage and tutoring her daughters gave her broad and sweeping access to Lucy’s private life was almost too much to bear. And the judgment! Back in her day, did she not clutch at Master Rankin in the dark? Find herself surprised by pleasure? Perhaps not, come to think on it.

Tying the strings of her petticoat, buttoning her frock, brushing her hair, Lucy tried to restore herself — returning what was private to their hidden places beneath cloth. And James? In his rush to leave, he’d said only that he would head south, “into the bayou.” He’d dwell, Lucy presumed, somewhere else until such time as the stink and shame of Mrs. Rankin’s intrusion passed. Would it pass? Apart from the distasteful encounter, there was this: Lucy had once again lost her husband to the wilds. It hardly mattered that this time he ran away from something rather than towards something. He was, once again, absent. Lucy had no doubt his beloved birds would come to his rescue — distractions and passions not afforded her.

After a quick succession of taps, Nelly entered.

“Laundry day, Missus.” She nodded toward the bed. The slave’s quick look down told Lucy that she knew. Either Mrs. Rankin had told her or more likely, the man with the lantern had passed along the gossip. Then again, maybe she’d been roused by the shrieks and seen James slinking off, his crown of thick curls catching the moonlight. If so, she must have wondered at his haste, how he trotted along on his horse with only one arm in his jacket, head turning back in a gesture of fear and regret.

Regarding the linens? She could have at it! Let them be boiled in lye, rinsed, and freshened by sunlight! A literal washing away of the shameful taint.

Life went on.

That morning after lessons – today the Anglo Saxon and Norman invasions of Great Britain — the girls and Lucy headed to their favorite picnic spot. East of the classroom cottage and up on a slight knoll, grew one of the oldest live oaks on the plantation. A landmark. Lucy snapped open a damask cloth under its broad branches and behind the veils of Spanish moss. On occasion, they liked to sit there, have a few savories, and take in the view, enjoying whatever coolness the shade had to offer. The bugs pestered them but they made do, waving fans and hankies, laughter in between. The older girls were restless that day and for a change, Lucy knew why. The upcoming year-end celebration. Festivities being planned. But more, the engagement parties that would follow in quick succession.

Rebecca stood tall and sturdy and looked at the world like a puzzle to be solved. Calm. Deliberate. Perhaps her point of view was unusual for a plantation owner’s daughter, most of whom seemed to consider life a banquet being served them, the sole weight of decision being what to consume first. Quick at sums as well as Latin, there was no doubt that Rebecca would run a household with graceful efficiency, unlike the stiff and artless matron, her mother. That woman’s cold dictatorial brittleness endeared her to none.

Above photo attribution

Goblins and Heretics

I woke after dreaming of loan sharks in the city. How they and government programs worked hand in hand to perpetuate cycles of poverty. And then there was a clan called The Goblins, who wore dark creepy outfits and looked evil but actually performed charitable works. Brooklyn.

Speaking of dreams. The Heretic’s Daughter is a good book. A story of the early days of our colony and the witch hysteria of the late 1600’s. Well-researched and well-written. I’m learning a lot. But she exemplifies the fiction writer’s maxim: Tell a dream, lose a reader.

Every third or so chapter begins with a dream. Stop! I say. Stop! Hard eye roll, followed by skimming. They’re never integral to plot and she does a lot of other scene/mood setting so — unnecessary.

There! I said it.

I’m famous now

Hey hey! Just kidding. But a super nice and well-known former Boston radio DJ and talk show host, Jordan Rich, interviewed me for his podcast, On Mic.

JR, as he’s called, worked as a disc jockey and talk show host throughout the Boston area for decades, including as the morning drive host for WSSH-FM (1982 to 1996) and as cohost of The Morning Show on WRKO-AM (1978 to 1982). He is co-owner of Chart Productions, a company offering a full range of audio and video production and coaching services.

When you hear how gorgeous his voice is, you won’t be at all surprised that he’s made careers in radio and podcasting.

He asked really great questions about my research process, crafting voice for my characters, and more.

First link is for iPhone.

And this link is for Android devices:

I don’t think I sound too stupid.

If you have time, please leave his podcast a review.

Gifts given in my novel

Here’s a partial list of gifts given in The Weight of Cloth:

A Bible / a caramel candy / a pearl necklace / a cotton lawn handkerchief / figs / a packet of candied orange rinds / an assortment of perennial seeds / a turkey feather / three grains of rice / a broom made of dogwood sticks / an alligator tenderloin / a carved wooden bowl / shared tricks on how to foil the patrollers / a tortoiseshell comb / a moss green gown / a set of dainty silver spoons / yardage of lace / a mechanical wooden duck toy / Madagascar rice.

The Weight of Cloth: A Novel is available on Amazon now! A day early. For Barnes & Noble, Smashwords, Apple Books, and others, you need to wait until tomorrow.

Drayton Hall
Collage using image of The Door of No Return, Elmina Castle, Ghana
Slave quarters at Aiken Rhett House

Not this, not that, but ALL THE OTHER

At a friend’s house yesterday, we both admitted that we’re not up to much creatively these days. She, because of back surgery and a fairly recent retirement from a demanding job. Me? The book I guess. “It takes up energy even when I’m not doing much,” I lamented.

But then I gave her a rundown of the tasks I had completed on the day before. Just the one day. It shocked me how much there was to recite.

I’ll post at the end for my own sake. I don’t expect anyone (except maybe someone in the middle of self-publishing) to be interested.

Comma La — get it?

The mood in my circle of friends is unanimously ebullient. There’s hope again. Relief and energy too. Many of us had no idea just how much dread and fear we were holding in our bodies. I feel like I can breathe again, I kept saying.

On my almost-weekly Tuesday call (the one that’s been going since Trump got elected), there’s been a need during the final moments of our half-hour together to find something positive to report. It’s often been so grim that it’s difficult to think of something.

How wonderful, then, to not need the flourish of positivity at the end of this week’s call. The entire half-hour was buoyed by optimism.

Here we go! Are you ready to pitch in? I just asked for 25 more addresses from #PostcardstoVoters but I want to do more.

His George Washington moment cemented his legacy

Now the boring book details:

Wrote a third person, short “about page” for blog like they recommend. Researched how to pin it to top of blog and nearly gave up (invariably the first three buttons I’m supposed to “just click” are not in evidence). But then when I finally figured it out, I promptly undid it because it left a huge white space below, making accessing the blog inconvenient.

Revised longer ABOUT. It was very dated.

Spent a couple hours scanning the proof copy of my book and making notes for HISTORY post (this time Hell Hole Swamp and George Whitefield got written up and posted in draft).

Waited anxiously for my designer to send the copy of book cover for Amazon that includes the bar code. I had to ask him to take D2D’s out because their barcode override button is broken. Then I had to ask for both versions of the cover to have wider images so that the white stripe would disappear. He didn’t answer right away and I thought he might not at all because there have been a lot of changes. He complained. I paid him more than 20% extra on Sunday so I perhaps should’ve been comfortable expecting him to get the Amazon cover correct but I wasn’t. (It arrived the next day).

Signed in to Twitter and Instagram on my laptop. Still have to do Facebook. Naturally this involves changing passwords. Learned that FB is taxing the ads that you post there (which everyone says to do to promote your book) and that you can avoid that tax by accessing your account through a laptop. I don’t actually know.

As I was pondering whether to offer some free ARCs (advanced reader copies), I was dismayed to learn that Amazon might be making it difficult for someone who did not purchase the book through them to post a review (it’s the whole reason you give ARCs away). Okay, so maybe skip them.

Then I learned that Amazon is running bots to prevent review-scams. There are some scams out there, but friends and family of a self-published author posting reviews is hardly one of them. I’ve seen threads where authors crow about getting their first non-acquaintance review, so maybe this isn’t happening to the degree that I read it is.

Definitively decided not to post to Barnes & Noble directly because of the apparent demand that that they be supplied with a Barnes & Noble-specific ISBN. What bullshit! And honestly, the threads about this are contradictory and confusing even in the Barnes & Noble frequently asked questions section. So at this point I just can’t be bothered.

Hence the nickname “Dr. Squintum”